Some more reviews for Sugar & Spice

Hi!

As we speak, Sugar & Spice is still in the Top 50 Bestsellers on Amazon Kindle Store (UK) and has passed its 2,200 book sale for February.

Here’s some more of what readers have been saying about it:

 

5.0 out of 5 stars OH BOY, 22 Feb 2011
This review is from: Sugar & Spice (Kindle Edition)

 

This book was frightening to say the least + full of mind provoking facts- had to leave it though at several stages as I became too scared to read on!! Came back- as curiosity took the better of me. Found I was holding my breath too as many awful situations occurred, heart pounding and even “talked” and shouted at my Kindle. Not for the feint hearted. OH BOY.

 

5.0 out of 5 stars Compelling, realistic read. Could not put it down., 21 Feb 2011
By
M. Leese (West Sussex, UK) – See all my reviews
(REAL NAME)
This review is from: Sugar & Spice (Kindle Edition)

 

Found this via Kindle store and downloaded it as it was a cheaper read and I’m so glad I found this author and book. It is just amazing.

The detail and research that have gone into it are outstanding. This makes it a fast, impossible to put down read – up with the likes of Peter James.

However, a word of warning – it is graphic in its detail and its insight into the mind of a paedophile in the character of Greg Randall. This makes it chilling but also makes it believable and realistic, if not also uncomfortable reading in places.

I will certainly look for more by this author in the same genre and would recommend to anyone who enjoys a well written british crime thriller.

 

5.0 out of 5 stars Exceptional in every way!, 20 Feb 2011
This review is from: Sugar & Spice (Kindle Edition)

 

Now and then you come across a book that take a tired old concept – in this case a serial killer stalking little kids – and turns it on its head, to produce something truly original.

Not since The Silence Of The Lambs has anything in the crime thriller genre come close to warranting the term ground-breaking.

Until now.

Sugar & Spice takes us on a roller-coaster ride of emotions, at once appalling yet mesmerising in its subject matter. It takes apart the mind of the paedophile and reassembles it in three different characters, only one of which is the killer.

And therein lies the true depth and beauty of this novel.

For while the mother of a murdered child seeks, and eventually succeeds, in bringing the killer to justice, two innocent men pay the price along the way.

Only, neither are innocent. So why do we feel for them? Care about them? Dare I say, trust them?

If you want gory detail of post-mortems, stick with Scarpetta. If it’s plodding police detectives, Morse is your man. If you like the mystery to be solved with high-tech forensics, go back to CSI:Miami. This is unlike anything else out there.

And written in a unique style that just drags you through the pages by your hair, defying you to take a break. And on those odd moments when you dare put it down you are left with questions you wish you hadn’t been asked, that taunt you, compelling you to read on.

I understand this is a first novel from this author. Let’s hope it’s not a one-shot wonder and there’s plenty more to come!

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Rights v Right?

The main news in the UK yesterday centered around the story that following a ruling by The Supreme Court, Sex Offenders will have the right to appeal to have their name taken off The Sex Offenders register. (15 years following their release from prison)

Last year, the court decided that putting sex offenders on the register for life without a right of appeal was “disproportionate”.

Judges said they should be allowed to prove they had changed.

See the full article here: http://news.sky.com/skynews/Home/UK-News/Sex-Offenders-To-Get-Right-To-Appeal-Being-On-Sex-Register-For-Life-Theresa-May-Speaks-In-Commons/Article/201102315932225?f=rss

This news has been met with mixed reactions obviously, ranging from the “‘what about the rights of the victims?” to “you’ve done your time…”

The focus here seems to be the issue relating to the type of sex offence committed originally (it had to have carried at least a 30 month sentence) and the age of the offender. Many are referring to the case of the 11 year old boy who is now obviously much older and believes that being on the register is preventing him leading an ordinary life, for a crime he committed whilst a minor.

There is no proof that a cure or rehabilitation exists for the perpetrators of such crimes; and therefore, many are saying that they will still pose a risk to society and go on to re-offend. The rate of re-offence is actually quite low (compared to other crimes) at 25%, but people believe that being on the register is a deterrent against re-offence.

Is that the case? Does being on a list, stop a paedophile or rapist going out and doing it all again once released? Should people convicted of these crimes have the right to an appeal?

As mentioned in an earlier post, lesser crimes are sometimes committed at an early age that lead to more serious ones, so is the argument for minors/younger offenders valid or would leaving them on the register help to prevent the seriousness of their crimes escalating?

Is the 18 year old from Wigan (who raped a six year old boy when 11) now no longer a sexual predator, thanks to his time in jail, that the public don’t need to be wary of  or is he a monster in waiting?

#samplesunday – Sugar & Spice C’s 31-33 *Warning! Contains graphic references

31

The hysterical screams lasted perhaps fifteen minutes before exhaustion consumed Laura’s body and she fell to the floor, alone and afraid.

She found the pup’s body and clutched it to her chest, taking comfort from the still warm cadaver.

Eventually she cried herself to sleep in the darkness, lulled by the gentle motion of the vehicle.

The van stopped only twice on the journey, once to change the licence plates on a secluded road, once for fuel, paying cash. Now it was parked in the pay and display car park on Rhyl promenade, the driver in the Sun Centre, an imposing glass-fronted leisure complex combining pool and theatre, over-looking the Irish Sea. To the east, the Dee Estuary poured forth its effluent, while on its Queensferry banks anxious neighbours joined the police scouring the area for signs of the missing child.

Being the last weekend of the school holiday the leisure pool was well-attended, locals and late holidaymakers alike determined to make the most of it.

Though a competent swimmer he never ventured into the water once during the three hours he spent there. He stripped to his trunks, spread out a towel and lay out on the window seat to enjoy the view, watching the little girls run past from the lagoon pool to the surfing pool, wet costumes clinging to young bodies. It was an enjoyable afternoon spent building up an appetite for delights yet to come.

It was nearly six in the evening, a good few hours of daylight remaining, when he returned to the van. He retrieved a lunch-box from beneath his seat and satisfied his hunger on a selection of cheese and pickle rye-bread sandwiches, washed down with a flask of decaffeinated coffee.

He unrolled a copy of the Telegraph, casually browsing through, taking in the headlines, but skipping the details. He preferred the Guardian, for its keener coverage of social issues, although he found its politics too liberal for his taste. Having spent the previous night in a hotel in Bradford he’d not had the benefit of his usual paper and had made do with what the foyer offered.

By eight o’clock there were perhaps three vehicles still remaining. He slipped in the CD, then made his way to the back of the van, checking about him before opening the back doors. It was dark inside. He climbed in and secured the doors behind him before tugging a lever that illuminated the van’s rear interior.

Little Laura lay semi-comatose, the trauma too much for her young mind, curled in foetal position, her thumb in her mouth, her other arm around the dead puppy.

The scene brought a smile to his face. Her cheeks were streaked with tears, her hair dishevelled, her dress creased and bloodstained where the pup lay against her. He grasped the now cold animal by its already stiffening tail and gently eased it from her tiny fingers.

The girl stirred as she felt the puppy move and she opened her eyes. For a second she stared blankly at the man before her, uncomprehending, then her young mind focused, the brown eyes widening. Her body shook as she sat up and prepared to scream.

Far too young to understand his intentions.

Old enough to be so very afraid.

32

He drove the few miles back to Prestatyn, staying in a cheap bed and breakfast overnight, affecting a convincing Welsh accent during his dealings with the landlady. He gave his name as Jones. Tom Jones. If only, she’d sighed. He wriggled his pelvis for her in a poor imitation and for the rest of the evening he received the red carpet treatment.

He said he wouldn’t be wanting breakfast. He had to continue his journey first thing, to be back in Swansea for his next shift. The landlady was delighted. Thirty pounds for changing a few sheets was fine by her. But for fifty-three year old Mrs Gwyneth Humphries the best was yet to come.

When he put on his Tom Jones accent and said he’d like her to join him for the optional evening meal she was in seventh heaven. When he took to the upright piano in the guest’s lounge after dinner and ran off a passable rendition of Delilah, followed by Green, Green Grass she almost wet herself. The other guests applauded loudly, adults and children alike.

The little girl from Manchester sat on his lap, her parents looking on, delighted with the free entertainment. “You should be on the stage,” they said, oblivious to his hand beneath their daughter’s dress. The child too excited to notice, too young to think anything of it if she had.

At eleven thirty he disappointed them all by announcing it was time for bed. He had a long drive ahead of him in the morning. He kissed the little girl good night, shook hands all round and settled with the landlady before retiring. She couldn’t quite bring herself to waive the fee for the evening meal, but let him off the two pound surcharge for parking his van on the drive.

He awoke at six on the Monday morning and left the building unnoticed. Mrs Humphries wouldn’t be stirring for another half hour. Breakfasts were served strictly between seven-thirty and nine. No exceptions. On the way out he picked a single rose from a neighbouring garden and put it in a glass of water on the kitchen table, with his compliments. His calling cards were strictly reserved.

33

A brisk wind had brought broken cloud scudding across the Irish Sea. He drove into the town centre and took coffee and toast at a cafe in the High Street, collecting a Guardian on the way. With an Irish accent, he made polite conversation as he paid, enquiring how to get back on the A55 to Holyhead. He had to be in Dublin by mid-afternoon and couldn’t afford to miss the ferry, he explained to the disinterested proprietor.

It was eight o’clock when he drank up, leaving a few pound coins, polished on a napkin, as a generous tip, and slipped out while the café owner tended fried eggs out back. Driving out of town, back towards Rhyl, he spied a girl on her way home after a sleep-over at a friend’s house, struggling to pedal her bike against the strong breeze.

He drove past slowly, watching her in the wing mirror. The wind whipped her skirt about her legs revealing glimpses of thigh. He felt the stirrings in his groin.

He pulled to a halt ahead of her, watching in the mirror as she drew closer, savouring the view. He switched the engine off, leaving just the sound of the wind and the gulls. He pushed the CD into the player and turned the volume down low. His lips parted in a smile as the music started.

There was no-one else about. A car disappeared into the distance.

The girl pedalled nearer, oblivious to his presence, ever closer, behind the van, moving out to overtake. He put his fingers on the door handle and stopped, taking deep breaths.

She was nine. Ten, maybe.

White ankle socks.

A skirt much too short for cycling.

A glimpse of her underwear and he was breathing heavily.

She was alongside now.

Riding alongside the van, level with his door.

And then she was past, her hair flailing behind her in the wind.

Still cycling.

Safe.

Alive.

She’d never know how close she’d come.

How lucky she was to have been in the wrong place at the right time.

He turned the key and drove slowly away.

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5 star reviews! Top 25 in Amazon UK Kindle Store/Top 10 Thriller! Get it now:

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Crime & punishment

With the news yesterday that the Government in Great Britain plans to replace ASBOs http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-12378755 and growing public disdain at lenient sentences for offenders, let’s talk a little bit about suitable punishment and justice for criminals.

Here in the UK, if you want to see the crime rates for your area/street/postcode etc and what type of crimes are being committed, it’s quite simple. Go to: http://www.police.uk/

This lets you see what type of crimes are being reported in your area. Note the use of the word reported. OK, great. But what happens to these people? Do these figures show arrests or convictions? No.

How many crimes go unreported due to lack of faith in the justice system? You’ve done it yourself, admit it. (be careful there!) You have a garage or shed broken into, a bike stolen, your car damaged etc. You report it to obtain a crime number for insurance purposes, but you don’t really expect anyone to be caught do you? Or that your property will be returned?

Let’s move on to more serious crimes. The forthcoming Snow White Series will deal with all sorts. Drugs, people trafficking, murder, rape (poor Cass eh?) and lots more besides. OK, it’s fictional, but we all now that unfortunately, we live in a society where these crimes are all too real.

Does the punishment fit the crime? Are sentences long enough? Do offenders receive the right kind of help, early enough (see my earlier post on Robert Black)https://saffinadesforges.wordpress.com/2011/01/05/child-killers/

How do you feel as a mother, father, carer, teacher or just a tax-paying member of the public? Are you confident that crime is dealt with effectively or would you like to see more Draconian punishment doled out?

OR is evil just something you’re born with? Stay safe.

Saffina

Glorious villain

I just Tweeted about watching ‘Cape Fear’ again the other night and what a great part Robert De Niro plays as Max Cady.

He is your ultimate bad guy right?

In Sugar & Spice, Uncle Tom is the main ‘baddie’ but there are other villains.  Some in positions of trust, they just don’t get caught…

In Book One of the forthcoming Snow White Series, The Huntsman is the obvious antagonist, and main target for our protag, Cass White; but he hides behind the real villain of the piece, Queenie.

They say conflict sells a story. Put your hero in a situation, give them a goal, then put things in the way – constantly. We all love a book that has a happy ending right?

Most crime-thillers end with the capture or termination of the bad guy (or gal!), but what about the ones that got away?

I suppose that is why Hannibal Lecter had such appeal.

“I’ve no plans to call on you, Clarice. The world is more interesting with you in it.”

Saffina

 

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