#samplesunday – Sugar & Spice C’s 31-33 *Warning! Contains graphic references

31

The hysterical screams lasted perhaps fifteen minutes before exhaustion consumed Laura’s body and she fell to the floor, alone and afraid.

She found the pup’s body and clutched it to her chest, taking comfort from the still warm cadaver.

Eventually she cried herself to sleep in the darkness, lulled by the gentle motion of the vehicle.

The van stopped only twice on the journey, once to change the licence plates on a secluded road, once for fuel, paying cash. Now it was parked in the pay and display car park on Rhyl promenade, the driver in the Sun Centre, an imposing glass-fronted leisure complex combining pool and theatre, over-looking the Irish Sea. To the east, the Dee Estuary poured forth its effluent, while on its Queensferry banks anxious neighbours joined the police scouring the area for signs of the missing child.

Being the last weekend of the school holiday the leisure pool was well-attended, locals and late holidaymakers alike determined to make the most of it.

Though a competent swimmer he never ventured into the water once during the three hours he spent there. He stripped to his trunks, spread out a towel and lay out on the window seat to enjoy the view, watching the little girls run past from the lagoon pool to the surfing pool, wet costumes clinging to young bodies. It was an enjoyable afternoon spent building up an appetite for delights yet to come.

It was nearly six in the evening, a good few hours of daylight remaining, when he returned to the van. He retrieved a lunch-box from beneath his seat and satisfied his hunger on a selection of cheese and pickle rye-bread sandwiches, washed down with a flask of decaffeinated coffee.

He unrolled a copy of the Telegraph, casually browsing through, taking in the headlines, but skipping the details. He preferred the Guardian, for its keener coverage of social issues, although he found its politics too liberal for his taste. Having spent the previous night in a hotel in Bradford he’d not had the benefit of his usual paper and had made do with what the foyer offered.

By eight o’clock there were perhaps three vehicles still remaining. He slipped in the CD, then made his way to the back of the van, checking about him before opening the back doors. It was dark inside. He climbed in and secured the doors behind him before tugging a lever that illuminated the van’s rear interior.

Little Laura lay semi-comatose, the trauma too much for her young mind, curled in foetal position, her thumb in her mouth, her other arm around the dead puppy.

The scene brought a smile to his face. Her cheeks were streaked with tears, her hair dishevelled, her dress creased and bloodstained where the pup lay against her. He grasped the now cold animal by its already stiffening tail and gently eased it from her tiny fingers.

The girl stirred as she felt the puppy move and she opened her eyes. For a second she stared blankly at the man before her, uncomprehending, then her young mind focused, the brown eyes widening. Her body shook as she sat up and prepared to scream.

Far too young to understand his intentions.

Old enough to be so very afraid.

32

He drove the few miles back to Prestatyn, staying in a cheap bed and breakfast overnight, affecting a convincing Welsh accent during his dealings with the landlady. He gave his name as Jones. Tom Jones. If only, she’d sighed. He wriggled his pelvis for her in a poor imitation and for the rest of the evening he received the red carpet treatment.

He said he wouldn’t be wanting breakfast. He had to continue his journey first thing, to be back in Swansea for his next shift. The landlady was delighted. Thirty pounds for changing a few sheets was fine by her. But for fifty-three year old Mrs Gwyneth Humphries the best was yet to come.

When he put on his Tom Jones accent and said he’d like her to join him for the optional evening meal she was in seventh heaven. When he took to the upright piano in the guest’s lounge after dinner and ran off a passable rendition of Delilah, followed by Green, Green Grass she almost wet herself. The other guests applauded loudly, adults and children alike.

The little girl from Manchester sat on his lap, her parents looking on, delighted with the free entertainment. “You should be on the stage,” they said, oblivious to his hand beneath their daughter’s dress. The child too excited to notice, too young to think anything of it if she had.

At eleven thirty he disappointed them all by announcing it was time for bed. He had a long drive ahead of him in the morning. He kissed the little girl good night, shook hands all round and settled with the landlady before retiring. She couldn’t quite bring herself to waive the fee for the evening meal, but let him off the two pound surcharge for parking his van on the drive.

He awoke at six on the Monday morning and left the building unnoticed. Mrs Humphries wouldn’t be stirring for another half hour. Breakfasts were served strictly between seven-thirty and nine. No exceptions. On the way out he picked a single rose from a neighbouring garden and put it in a glass of water on the kitchen table, with his compliments. His calling cards were strictly reserved.

33

A brisk wind had brought broken cloud scudding across the Irish Sea. He drove into the town centre and took coffee and toast at a cafe in the High Street, collecting a Guardian on the way. With an Irish accent, he made polite conversation as he paid, enquiring how to get back on the A55 to Holyhead. He had to be in Dublin by mid-afternoon and couldn’t afford to miss the ferry, he explained to the disinterested proprietor.

It was eight o’clock when he drank up, leaving a few pound coins, polished on a napkin, as a generous tip, and slipped out while the café owner tended fried eggs out back. Driving out of town, back towards Rhyl, he spied a girl on her way home after a sleep-over at a friend’s house, struggling to pedal her bike against the strong breeze.

He drove past slowly, watching her in the wing mirror. The wind whipped her skirt about her legs revealing glimpses of thigh. He felt the stirrings in his groin.

He pulled to a halt ahead of her, watching in the mirror as she drew closer, savouring the view. He switched the engine off, leaving just the sound of the wind and the gulls. He pushed the CD into the player and turned the volume down low. His lips parted in a smile as the music started.

There was no-one else about. A car disappeared into the distance.

The girl pedalled nearer, oblivious to his presence, ever closer, behind the van, moving out to overtake. He put his fingers on the door handle and stopped, taking deep breaths.

She was nine. Ten, maybe.

White ankle socks.

A skirt much too short for cycling.

A glimpse of her underwear and he was breathing heavily.

She was alongside now.

Riding alongside the van, level with his door.

And then she was past, her hair flailing behind her in the wind.

Still cycling.

Safe.

Alive.

She’d never know how close she’d come.

How lucky she was to have been in the wrong place at the right time.

He turned the key and drove slowly away.

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Glorious villain

I just Tweeted about watching ‘Cape Fear’ again the other night and what a great part Robert De Niro plays as Max Cady.

He is your ultimate bad guy right?

In Sugar & Spice, Uncle Tom is the main ‘baddie’ but there are other villains.  Some in positions of trust, they just don’t get caught…

In Book One of the forthcoming Snow White Series, The Huntsman is the obvious antagonist, and main target for our protag, Cass White; but he hides behind the real villain of the piece, Queenie.

They say conflict sells a story. Put your hero in a situation, give them a goal, then put things in the way – constantly. We all love a book that has a happy ending right?

Most crime-thillers end with the capture or termination of the bad guy (or gal!), but what about the ones that got away?

I suppose that is why Hannibal Lecter had such appeal.

“I’ve no plans to call on you, Clarice. The world is more interesting with you in it.”

Saffina

 

Playing with the boys

Well, what a week Andy Gray and Richard Keys have had over at Sky.

http://www.guardian.co.uk/football/2011/jan/25/andy-gray-sacked-sky

http://www.mirror.co.uk/news/top-stories/2011/01/27/richard-keys-quits-and-blames-dark-forces-at-sky-for-forcing-him-and-andy-gray-out-115875-22878360/

Allegations of sexism and ‘inappropriate behaviour’ coupled with comments made about a female football official have brought their relationship with Sky to an abrupt end.

In Book One of our new Crime-thriller series, Snow White, the protagonist is DCI Cass White.

Promoted following the untimely murder of her superior, Bill Andrews, by The Huntsman (part of an underground, criminal cartel trying to get their hands on a priceless ruby apple with a huge diamond core and killing everyone who gets in their way in the process), Cass seeks to avenge his death by catching him and locking him up for life. She expects the support and loyalty of her team to help her do this; they have other ideas.

She is a woman in a position of authority in a man’s world and not all of them like it. Hey, Cass, get used to it!

Snow White deals with the obstacles that women face today when working in male dominated professions and follows the prejudice she encounters relating to her personal life too.

Snow White is a work of fiction, but just how real is this problem? How many of you girls out there have suffered similar issues? How many of the men have and would you dare admit it? How many of you are guilty of it?

We all like a laugh and a joke, at work and socially, but with new legislation such as The Equality Act 2010 and people being protected from unfair discrimination relating to disability, sexual orientation, age, religious beliefs etc, how far is too far and is it taking away people’s rights to an opinion and our freedom of speech?

Introductions

Hello and welcome along.

I am Saffina Desforges and this blog is dedicated to my writing.

My writing will not be for everyone. Please do not continue/look away now if you are: Under 18, easily offended/of a sensitive nature or too scared to face the truth.

Described by one leading agent as “well-written” and “compelling,” Sugar & Spice is the first of three novels dealing in psycho-sexual deviancy. Work on the sequel, Puppy Dogs’ Tails is under way. The third book, Cold Blood, will explore the murky world of necrophilia.

When you’ve got two young children, and you think the unthinkable, where do you turn?

Inspired by a real-life sex-offender who begged a Judge to give him a longer sentence, because he knew he would harm more children if released, Sugar & Spice seeks answers to the questions society prefers not to ask.

Meticulously researched, and based on real-life studies, Sugar & Spice is car-crash reading. Only the characters are fictional…

You can register and read chapters of Sugar & Spice here: http:// www.authonomy.com

Some comments from authonomy about Sugar & Spice:

“Sugar and Spice is about turning a clever concept into a brilliant piece of work. Compelling, thrilling and dark make this a thriller with depth, and a book that deserves a place on any shelf, and especially in a book shop.

Backed easily,

Lisa”

“Looking at the list of favourite authors I can see where you get inspiration but you have an outstanding style of your own. This is a dark and very realistic thriller with malevolent undertones that straight away draws the reader into the plot, with a pace that drives the narrative forward.

Powerful,descriptive and highly readable.

Jane”

“..Frightening, I find myself checking on my son just to make sure he’s alright, this is disturbing stuff but right on the money, this would make a fantastic miniseries or drama for late evening, the subjecy is relevant, topical and close to every parents heart. You do a good job of showing how shit the justice system is in dealing with these animals and your portrayal of the mother is especially heartbreaking, I truly believe this should be picked up and televised. Good luck and keep going with this, use Facebook and blogging to promote it and get ths story out there.”

“Sugar and Spice, the opening to an age old rhyme. The trouble is this book isn’t nice – but the author has handled the chapters I read so well.
The opening of this book is shocking, hard hitting and brutal and unfortunately, very realistic. I can see this being picked up by a major publishing house and becoming a best seller.”

“Excellent writing. Reads superbly well. Looks like a winner to me and I wish I had written it.
Backed
David (Flawless Murder)”

“A great pitch, followed by a well researched story. I think this book should be on everyone’s shelf. A look into the complex mind of a sex offender, which can be a shocking place to visit. Well done on the excellent piece of writing. Backed. Eunice – The Temple Dancer.”

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